Friday, January 8, 2010

Flash 55 1/09/10

Flash 55 is a Friday challenge issued by some new writing friends I have been privileged to join. You have 55 words to create a scene. Here is my first offering:

Jessie's Quest (she's 3)

Grandma, can I have some “Fruities”?
Go ask your Mom, Jessie. Only if she says it’s okay.
Mom, can I have some “Fruities”?
No, Jessie, it’s too close to lunch.
Grandma is fixing us grilled cheese sandwiches.
You’ll have to wait.
Grandma, Mom says it’s okay.

Copyright Parrot Writes 2010

5 comments:

  1. Ha! That DEFINITELY rings true to life.

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  2. Wonderful! I love it. You knocked this out of the park.

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  3. Oh, you've met my kids. Great first Flash 55!

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  4. That is awesome, Linda :)

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  5. It just reinforces your suggestion of writing about the kids and what they do as the story line of the childrens virtue stories.

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