Use the following words together in a story:
Remara Bearwafter
Steamroller Envelope
Secrets Food fight
The Bullied One
La la la
Remara
Said the kids taunting her
Ba ba ba Bearwafter
Echoed their cruel laughter
Food fight junk of her life
Flies around her bleak world
While its harsh steamroller
Flattens her weak envelope
Crushing the secret hope
Of happy acceptance
Said the kids taunting her
Ba ba ba Bearwafter
Echoed their cruel laughter
Food fight junk of her life
Flies around her bleak world
While its harsh steamroller
Flattens her weak envelope
Crushing the secret hope
Of happy acceptance
Response from my instructor Ann:
ReplyDeleteThis is the essence of creative galumphing. The odd words become poetic images as the taunts become steamrollers, and her hope, an envelope. The bullying is the uncontrolled chaos of kids in a foodfight. It’s a keeper, Parrot!
Excellent, Linda. I love it and admire you for composing it.
ReplyDeleteNice one, Linda!
ReplyDeleteThis really is an impressive piece. Ann has it exactly right. Congrats.
ReplyDeleteReally nice piece. You capture the essence of her life so well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ladies! I appreciate your comments.
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