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Sunday, April 15, 2012
Texture from the Coachella Valley
Our trip to Palm Springs was grand (even though it rained one day!) During our sightseeing adventures, I snapped pictures of the wonderful texture of the landscape and foliage.


Saturday, April 7, 2012
Luck Seven Meme Tag (Hey Shaddy, Gully - you're it)
I’ve been tagged for the Lucky Seven Meme by Dana Mason. If you don’t know Dana, go check out her chosen seven at http://dayner.wordpress.com/. I'm excited for the upcoming release of her new novel Dangerous Embrace in October.
Here are the rules of the game:
- Go to page 77 of your current manuscript or WIP.
- Go to line 7.
- Copy down the next 7 sentences and post them as written.
- Tag 7 authors.
- Let them know.
I’m using 7 sentences starting at line 7 on page 77 from my work in progress with the trial title of "Anna of the Portrait." Diesel is Hugo's guide dog.
He heard Diesel barking and looked up to see the dog
bounding down the driveway towards him. He looked behind Diesel for Hugo but he
wasn’t there. Diesel stopped in front of him and he grabbed a hold of the dog’s
lead and held on as he pulled him towards the cottage.
When he arrived he found the front door wide open and Hugo
inside, slumped on the couch. He reached toward him and shook his arm. Hugo
groaned and grabbed his head. "Oh man, someone conked me good."
I'll pass this on to a couple of my blogger buddies to see if they are interested in playing along.
Cheryl (Shaddy) http://papercutscreams.blogspot.com/
Labels:
Anna in the Portrait,
Hillside novel,
Novel #1
Monday, March 26, 2012
Psolitude
A writing prompt: Start the story with the following sentence: She closed the book, placed it on the table, and finally decided to walk through the door.
She closed the book, placed it on the table, and
finally decided to walk through the door.The music swelled as she slipped into the back row.
Some of the signatures in the book had been easier
to read than others: her sister’s, her mother’s. What would they say to her
now? Had it really been five years since she stormed out of the house with her
backpack and suitcase, screaming at her father, “I hate you; I’ll never set
foot in this house again.” Hateful, hurtful words. James had been waiting and
they drove for two days to lengthen the distance from her disapproving family.
“You’re too young Kelly; you’re only 18,” her father
said. “Plus he’s a hoodlum, just like his old man.”
He had been right, of course. Jailed twice for theft
and DUI, James had been undependable.
“I feel trapped in this apartment, in this
relationship,” he said, leaving her after the first year with only a few
possessions and substantial debt. But she didn’t have the courage to go home,
so she got a second job and applied for financial aid to enroll in the local
community college.
“Yea, though I
walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil.”
She opened her purse and pulled out the torn newspaper
clipping she’d received in the mail. Her sister wrote, “Come Home. Miss You” at
the top. She had no idea how her sister knew where to find her.
“I miss you too, sis,” she whispered.
“For
thou art with me; thy rod and thy staff they comfort me.”
She worked tirelessly to be a good employee at her
two jobs and a good student at school. It had all paid off; she finally
completed all of the requirements and passed the Certified Medical Assistant
exam. During that time she bonded with one classmate who became a special
friend. David listened to her story, dried her tears, kept her positive, and
encouraged her to return home.
“Mend the bridge Kelly,” he said. “Before it’s too
late.”
But it was too late.
It took the handwritten note from her sister to give
her the courage to be there today. She had waited until all the guests entered
the building before she walked into the vestibule. She stood listening to the murmuring
of people inside the chapel before she approached the memory table and the
book.
The pictures tore at her heart. Laughing pictures,
family pictures, pictures of her and her father.
Now from her seat at the back of the room she could
see the bowed heads of
her mother and sister, and the casket, stately displayed, covered with flowers. Would she be able to tell them how sorry she was that
she hadn’t been there these last five years? Hadn’t been there when her father
passed away. Hadn’t been there to tell him she really did love him.
"Surely
goodness and loving kindness will follow me all the days of my life."
Not for me, Kelly
thought. I don’t deserve any goodness or loving kindness.
When the service concluded, the first row of family
was escorted down the aisle. Kelly held her breath and studied her mother as
she walked past, unseeing. The look of unmistakable sadness and loss was
palpable, and tears coursed down Kelly’s cheeks. Her sister followed behind, her
eyes darting from one side of the aisle to the other, then resting on Kelly. A brilliant
smile lit her face as she rushed to embrace her.
“I knew you‘d come.”
Labels:
NPR flash fiction contest,
Psalm 23,
WRITING PROMPT
Monday, March 19, 2012
Bella and Her Person
Ann’s Galumping Prompt:
Make up a story using the following sentences:
The top shelf in the corner kitchen cabinet, the
one that’s hard to reach.
A small, glitter-covered, red and yellow bird
A blank check mistakenly thrown into the
trash.
A step ladder with no third step.
Bella licked her paw and feigned indifference to the goings on in the kitchen. Her person was spring cleaning, and not paying the least bit of attention to the pink and white ceramic food dish that sat on the floor empty.
“Meow, now,” she tried again.
Her person turned, balancing on the top of a step ladder with no third step. She was cleaning out the top shelf of the corner kitchen cabinet, the one that was hard to reach.
“Just a minute, Bella. Can’t you see I’m busy? I don’t want to fall off this worthless piece of.. . never mind, here I come.”
After her person filled the food dish, she opened the cabinet under the sink to toss the empty can into the garbage.
“Oh no, did I do that again?” she said pulling out a piece of paper from the garbage, whacking her head with the heel of her hand.
Bella looked up, licking the remnants of tuna treat off her whiskers. That’s the second time this month she’s mistakenly thrown a blank check into the trash. No skin off my nose as long as she keeps a roof over my head and the cat food coming.
She moved to the family room to complete her post-postprandial bath, just far enough away for privacy, but close enough to keep an eye on her person. She was tottering on that step ladder again, reaching into the depths of the top cabinet.
Out of the corner of her kitty eye she saw her person produce a small glitter-covered red and yellow bird.
“Oh, look at this, Bella. It was my Aunt Beth’s,” she said stepping down and missing the third step, tumbling to the floor.
The red and yellow bird flew across the room landing several feet away.
This is more like it, thought Bella assuming the pounce position. Now you have my attention.
Thursday, March 1, 2012
A Story from Ann's Plotting Challenge
Here are some basic facts about Loretta. She is 49. She is left-handed. She lives Taos, New Mexico. Her favorite color is red. She wears wedgie sandals, of a style she discovered in 1978, when she ordered a dozen pairs. She works as a part-time librarian and Home Health Aide. She has a two bedroom bungalow with a mortgage she can barely afford. She lives alone. One of her eyes is glass.
Give Loretta a plot. Conflict? Struggle? Resolution?
LYNETTE TO LORETTA
She replayed the message Myron left on her phone. “There was
a fire at the jail complex, and in the all the ruckus he escaped, Loretta. You
need to be on high alert.”
She threw down the phone and sank into the red upholstered chair
beside it. Now what was she going to do.
Her contact from the Witness Protection Program was her only connection
to her past life. She’d made sure to erase anything that could trace her to
Taos, New Mexico. She had even changed
careers, dyed her hair, and wore glasses, even though she didn’t need them.
She took off the red
framed glasses and rubbed her left eye, remembering why it was not her own –
why she now had a glass eye. He’d almost killed her that night. She’d
discovered his connection to the drug cartel when she overheard a conversation
on the phone. She had picked up the extension in her apartment bedroom at the
same time he answered the phone in the living room and had listened long enough
to hear the delivery date for a shipment of cocaine and the plan for a
murder.
She had tried to act nonchalant, but her boyfriend, Demetri,
had heard the click when she hung up the extension and had confronted her.
That’s when the violence began. He had beaten her to within an inch of her life
and left her to die. When she hadn’t shown up for work at the County Library
the next day, her friend Mona had come to her apartment, found her, and called
911.
She had found out later that the police had been following Demetri for the last year and
were now hoping to talk to her. They stationed a guard outside her hospital
room while she underwent several surgeries to repair the damage to her face.
She’d lost her left eye and now had a metal plate in her head, but would
recover. She gave the police all the
information she heard, which put Demetri behind bars. It would cost her the
life she currently lived, but with no family and at the age of 48, she was fine
with it. Lynette disappeared into the Witness Protection Program and became
Loretta.
In Taos, she bought a small two bedroom bungalow and began
training as a Home Health Aid. She worked
at the local library on the weekends, just because it was her first love. Money
was tight but she was getting used to the new arrangement. Her only regret was
leaving behind her best friend Mona without an explanation
.
Now a year later, she had a job as a Home Health Aid for an
adult foster home and was settled in, but she never let her guard down. She
picked up the phone to return Myron’s call.
“H..h..hello.” The
woman was crying. “Who, who is this?”
“Ah, I’m calling for Myron,” she answered, stunned that
someone had access to his private phone.
“You’re too late. He’s dead,” the woman wailed.
Myron was her only contact. It would now be up to her to
protect herself. She tried not to panic. She was resourceful, she was a quick
thinker. She had to figure it out. Should she go to the police here? No, there
was no one to confirm her identity or her predicament.
Loretta was scheduled to work the Friday evening shift, so she
dressed in her usual red scrubs and red wedgie sandals . This was the last pair
of a dozen she had bought thirty some years ago, the only thing she brought
with her to Taos from her past. That and the can of Bear Spray that Myron had
given her.
Her assignment that evening was Miss Ellen, a 92 year-old sweet
lady who was wheelchair-bound and attached to an oxygen tank. Miss Ellen’s handsome
son Robert came to visit her every evening.
“You know Loretta, my Robert is a widower and has a good job
and a nice car. He’s only 55 and he should get married again. Maybe you’d like
to have coffee with him.”
“Thank you Miss Ellen, but I’m not ready for any attachments
right now,” she said, blushing as she looked up to see Robert at the door.
“We’ll have to see about that. Perhaps dinner tomorrow?” Robert said giving her a friendly smile.
“She’d love to,” said Miss Ellen, “wouldn’t you dear. The
Cozy Corner would be perfect. She’ll meet you there at 6 p.m.”
“Ah, well, okay then,” Loretta responded. She did think he
was handsome and their brief conversations over the past several months had
been pleasant.
But all evening Loretta was distracted, worrying about her
problem. She knew she didn’t want a gun.
After her surgery she had suddenly become left handed and was not as adept with
it as she had been as a right-hander. She’d have to make room in her big bulky
purse for the Bear Spray. It would now accompany her everywhere. Just in case.
Saturday morning she dressed a pair of red slacks and a red
floral blouse. She fumbled with the strap of the red wedgie and cursed her
clumsy left-handedness. Checking herself
in the mirror she straightened her hairdo, gave it one more shot of hairspray,
and grabbed her heavy purse, ready for work.
It was a quiet morning at the library. There were several
students at the computers and a dozen patrons wandering the aisles. She was manning the check-out desk, when a
man approached and tossed a note on the counter.
“MEET ME OUTSIDE NOW” was printed in bold letters.
She looked up into Demetri's eyes. He grinned maliciously, opening his jacket to
show the gun in his hand. He jerked his head towards the side door.
She couldn’t believe how fast he’d found her. Poor Myron. Shaking, she grabbed her purse from under the
counter and headed for the door. Once
out the door, she slipped one hand inside her purse and grabbed the can of Bear Spray. She spun towards him and squirted it in his
face. He dropped the gun, screamed in agony and fell to the ground.
He writhed on the ground trying to wipe the dripping foam
from his eyes with one hand, and groped for his gun with the other. She kicked
it as far away as she could with her toe-less red sandal. The side door had
locked when they exited, so she sprinted to the front door to call the police.
When she was assured they were on their way, she ran back to
the front door just in time to see Demetri get into a black Ford Mustang and drive
haphazardly through the parking lot. He
gunned the engine when he got to the street and moments later she heard a loud
crash and saw flames shoot towards the sky.
By the time the police and fire department arrived, the car
was totally engulfed in flames. After
she had given them her statement, they told her the man at the wheel had died.
Free. She was free.
Loretta took the rest of the day off and headed towards the
downtown mall. A new slinky red dress and some spiked red heels were on the
shopping list for her date tonight. The red wedgies were going in the
garbage - the last symbol of her old life.
Saturday, February 18, 2012
The Old Mill Flashback
As a crow flies, it might be a five minute
bike-flight to the Old Mill from their cottage. But Nate figured it would
probably take at least twice as long to get there on the ground. You had to
follow Hillside Road past his cottage, then make a left onto Mountain Road and
stay on that road for a while. He’d only been by the turn off for the Old Mill
in the car when his father was driving.
He overheard his older brothers talking about riding
their bikes there when he came into the barn to put air in his tires.
“Can I come too?” he asked.
“Nope, you’re too little and it’s too far,” they'd
told him.
But he followed them anyway. Nate peddled as fast as his legs would go to
keep close enough to hear them, but far enough back that they couldn’t see him.
They always left him out; he’d just turned eight and they weren’t that much
older at eleven and twelve.
Trees rose from the ground on both sides of the
road, one after another, only inches from the pavement, and formed a canopy
over-head so thick the sky was blocked from view. Nate wiped sweat from his
forehead with the back of his hand and wished he’d brought his water bottle.
When Nate rounded the next bend, he saw them turn
onto a gravel road. Stopping his bike, he glanced around, taking a deep breath
and stepping from one foot to the other. This was the farthest he’d ridden from
the cottage and all he could see in every direction were trees.
He turned down the gravel road hoping they hadn’t
gotten too far ahead. The Old Mill came into view after a few minutes and as he
got closer, he saw their bikes leaning against the building by a set of double
doors that were ajar.
The old building looked like it was ready to fall
down. It listed to one side, rustic old boards and wood chips littered the
ground around it, and the two windows he could see had no glass.
Leaving his bike by the water wheel he crept forward
and cautiously peeked inside the doors.
“Hey, what’re you doin’ here?” Chris said, spotting
him. “You weren’t suppos’ ta follow us.”
“I ’m old ‘nuff,” he replied, lifting his chin a
notch higher.
“Hey Chris, maybe he wants to see the kittens we
found in the back room,” Sam said, elbowing him.
“Oh, yeah. Nate, there’s some kittens back here. Come
and see,” Chris said giggling as he led Nate to the small room at the back of the
building.
Nate stepped into the storage room and his brothers
slammed the door and locked it.
“That’ll teach ya’ to follow us.”
“Hey, lemme’ out,” Nate said banging on the door.
He could hear them laughing. “We’re leavin’ now.
Bye.”
He looked around the small room. There were no
kittens. He saw a window, but it was too high for him to reach. Nate sat
down and tried not to cry, but it was no use. Big fat tears slid down his
cheeks and he gulped great breaths of air as he looked around and tried to
think of a way out. Surely they would
come back for him.
Hugging his legs to his chest, he put his head down
on his knees. Then he heard her.
“Look around you. See the boxes. If you stack them,
you could reach the window.”
He looked around. There was no one there. But Nate
closed his eyes tightly and in his mind he could see her. Long dark hair pulled
back with a ribbon, about his age, in a long blue dress with ruffles at the
sleeves. The same girl that had helped him when he fell out of the apple tree
and broke his leg. She had sat with him then until his grandfather found him.
He couldn’t see her, but had felt her presence beside him. Just like now.
He stood and pushed the wooden boxes next to the
window, then stacked them one on top of the other. He’d stopped crying, but was shaking as he
moved two more boxes next to the three, then another box beside that, making
stairs to the window. He rubbed his leg before he started climbing.
Balancing
on the top box, he could reach the window sill. He found a smooth place and
pulled himself up, climbing with his feet on the wall, got one leg over the
sill and brought himself up to a straddle position. There was no other
way than to fall to the ground outside. Nate gave a shove and pushed himself
away from the wall, falling on his backside in the wood chips below.
“You still there, girl” he said out loud, brushing
the chips off his legs. “Hey? Girl? Well, thanks.”
There was no answer.
He ran to where he had left his bike. He’d been afraid they would hide it from him
and then he’d have to walk all the way home, but it was still there.
Nate peddled as fast as he could to the end of the gravel road, then screeched to a stop. Which
way should he go? He was turned around. He looked at the ground and saw the bicycle
tracks heading left, so he turned in that direction and rode like the wind. It
seemed to take forever, but he finally saw the turnoff from Mountain Road to
Hillside Drive and home.
Boy, were his brothers ever going to get into
trouble for this. Nate grinned as he went in search of his mother.
Labels:
Descriptive Writing,
Hillside,
Mapping,
Nate flashback
Thursday, February 16, 2012
25th Anniversary Dinner at the Side Door Cafe in Gleneden Beach
“Happy
25th Anniversary” written in blue and yellow chalk adorns the
sidewalk outside the entrance to the Side Door Café in Gleneden Beach. I called
ahead for reservations and mentioned we were celebrating this special event. Inside,
our table is decorated with red rose petals and a twisted red streamer down the
center. That’s just the start to our delightful celebratory evening.
A refurbished tile-production warehouse is the home
of this exceptional café, just off the beaten track of Highway 101. From the booths
and tables situated around the room, you can see a large window at the front of
the restaurant and a cozy lit fireplace to the side. The high, dark, exposed
beams at the ceiling along with the mahogany-colored walls give the interior a
rich elegant feeling. Hanging plants drape the sides of the booths and
different colored pots of plants placed around the room add to the lush
interior.
Our waiter is friendly and eager to make our dinner
a memorable one. He smiles at our delight in the chalked welcome at the entrance
and the decorations at our table. Throughout the dinner he appears and
disappears, as if by magic, taking care of our every whim.
The smell of freshly baked bread wafts through the
room. As plates pass our table to their respective guests, the spicy rich aromas
of the entrées tease our noses: Parmesean Encrusted Fresh Halibut atop Cappelini
Pasta, Dungeness Crab Cakes on a bed of Sautéed Spinach in a pool of Tomato Saffron
Broth, Fire Roasted Rack of Lamb with Summer Vegetable Risotto, Seafood Fettuccini
tossed with Sherried Pesto Cream Sauce.
We have eaten at the Side Door Café several times
before and know exactly what we want for our anniversary dinner. Honey Mustard
and Herb Rubbed Local Chinook Salmon drizzled with Marionberry Glaze, accompanied
by Fruited Wild Rice and Fresh Sautéed Seasonal Vegetables, a Caesar Salad to
split, and a bottle of Cristom Pinot Noir (2007 vintage) completes our order.
While we wait for our salad, we glance around the
room. Even though it’s summer, the small fire gives off an intimate warm glow
as if respecting the muted conversations and ambiance of the evening.
Our wine’s smoky cherry nose gives way to sweet
spices of anise and cinnamon with a raspberry fruit follow through on the palette.
The Caesar Salad is cold and crisp with a tangy pleasant bite to the dressing. The
superb Salmon flakes easily and the Marion Berry sauce adds a wonderful sweet flavor
to the hint of honey mustard coating. Fruited Wild Rice is an amazing
accompaniment and soaks up some of the berry sauce. Sautéed vegetables of zucchini,
onion, and carrots complete our dinner.
We remember to save a little room for dessert, and choose
to share the bread pudding with chocolate chips, which does not disappoint.
Custardy bread pudding with chocolate chips layered throughout and a drizzle of
chocolate syrup is a piece of heaven and a perfect way to end the evening.
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